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Recalling our times together conjures soft smiles to my face and faint shivers to my spine.
Are these feelings lost to you?
Countless nights I've spent,
Happy thoughts I've conceived,
All the dreams I've had, all end the same.
Exquisite friends and nothing more.
Love is just a concept; it's not so easy for me.
Somewhere between laughing for no reason, innocent smiles, and long talks, I fell in love.
And there's not a thing to act on.
Not while such barriers separate us.
Distance,
Sucks.
Quick poem, it turned out more urban than I'd thought.
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jasnac Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
Really nice poem & i totally agree with it, distance sucks a lot :)
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Leviticus-Blade Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :) glad you agree
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witte-draak Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Are you me?
It's hard to comment on something that describes my life right now so accurately.
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Leviticus-Blade Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's nice to see that my work can connect with people.
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witte-draak Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
I think long-distance is becoming more and more universal especially with internet facilitating connections that simply could not exist 50-60 years ago. I'm eternally grateful for modern technology as without it my boyfriend and I would not have made it (we're celebrating our first year in a week). This poem really hit me since it came at an hour that I was not feeling optimistic about our relationship and I was questioning some of my decisions that lead to it being long-distance in the first place...thank you!
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Leviticus-Blade Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, you are so very welcome. Seriously.
I'm very happy for you two. Long distance is tough, so I applaud you and your boyfriend for having that sort of strength.
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Valz138 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
Urban or not, I happen to fuuully agree with your words ;)
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Leviticus-Blade Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you :)
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